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Writing essays练习(一)
日期: 2018-09-29
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摘要:

PTE写作一般要求考生在20分钟内写出一篇200-300字(小于120或大于380,分数为0)的文章,PTE考试中有时会要求考生写出1-2篇文章,这个是根据实际情况而定。

 

不多说啦!直接来练练手吧(扎心了,同学们)小编也是希望同学们顺利通过PTE考试!

例题:

Some people believe that human behavior can be changed by laws; others argue that laws have little effect on human behavior. Which opinion do you agree with? Please explain.

参考范文:

Introduction

It is argued heatedly about whether human behaviors could be altered by laws. In my opinion, I think that legislations would definitely have this effects.

Body1:

It is reasonable for me to believe that laws can change people’s behavior. In my opinion, if people know the punishment of various laws, they would be very unlikely to commit crimes, because no one would enjoy those penalties. In other words, human’s behaviors are, in some senses, altered by law. Furthermore, some legislations may encourage good behaviour of people, such as helping those victims when they are suffering from illegal crimes. This, in my view, may also change people’s actions.

Body2:

In contrast, perhaps others may believe that laws have little effect on human behavior, and the reasons could be that potential criminals might think the police are not able to find them among the increasing populations in many countries. Nevertheless, in my opinion, this does not sound very convincing, because I think the power of the police has also been strengthened, especially in the scientific field. With the help of Internet and other advanced technologies, such as security cameras, it is more unlikely for potential criminals to break laws and they should be more careful for their behaviors.

Conclusion:

In conclusion, I strongly believe that laws could influence people and change their behaviors.

写作思路:

就这道题而言,最快速,最常见的方法就是选择一种观点并进行论证。因为很难中立,你不能说law即能change behavior, 又是没什么作用的。所以这里我们最方便的就是一边倒。那比如我们选择赞成laws can change people's behavior,但我们同样可以用have little effect 来进行论证反驳,这样你既不用担心自己没东西可写,又能够使文章更加出彩!

所以文章的大纲可以表述如下:

Introduction: I agree that law can alter people's behavior

Body1: can be changed by laws (理由:commit crimes would lead to punishment which deter people from breaking laws)

Body2: perhaps somebody may argue that …. little effect + 反驳 (理由:populations are booming, and there may be not enough police force to deal with crime, but development of science and technology could make it arrangement possible)

希望同学们通过不断的练习找到好的写作思路,在PTE写作中取得高分。

 



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